tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post6235390378267762177..comments2023-07-24T06:00:44.268-07:00Comments on Just Your Average Weary Traveler: ChimeraDon't Want A Real Jobhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01379423402452855166noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-69442445750813450422011-05-07T13:47:38.403-07:002011-05-07T13:47:38.403-07:00I really enjoyed this one. I too am praying for co...I really enjoyed this one. I too am praying for contentment and rebirth. Excellant work on this.<br /><br />my post was here<br /><br />http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/05/01/poem-flexed/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-30394457044402644132011-05-07T05:01:33.016-07:002011-05-07T05:01:33.016-07:00Backpack, I read your profile. Your writing tells ...Backpack, I read your profile. Your writing tells me you've already found yourself. It took me fifty years to be myself. You're there early. Pack an extra pen and go enjoy yourself. The world you meet will know you're coming. Enjoyed the post.Raining Iguanashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15461327421951949725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-8105978521318961352011-05-05T09:59:44.317-07:002011-05-05T09:59:44.317-07:00Lovely read.
Really loved 'burn sage...just in...Lovely read.<br />Really loved 'burn sage...just in case'.Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-56086599604966493302011-05-03T13:29:26.825-07:002011-05-03T13:29:26.825-07:00BIG HUG!
love & light.
LunaBIG HUG!<br /><br />love & light.<br /><br />LunaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-2169850857881086872011-05-03T04:23:30.730-07:002011-05-03T04:23:30.730-07:00i luvd d way uv described d whole transition allud...i luvd d way uv described d whole transition alludin 2 d fact tht nuthin is permanent. Times change n so do things. A mngful poem i'd say.Khushboo R. Gandhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17170920638924184073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-77328640751298585232011-05-02T19:35:53.092-07:002011-05-02T19:35:53.092-07:00A++
kindness is priceless.
bless your day.A++<br /><br />kindness is priceless.<br /><br />bless your day.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-88691421092013278402011-05-02T18:07:31.724-07:002011-05-02T18:07:31.724-07:00hmmm I enjoyed it all but most of all the section ...hmmm I enjoyed it all but most of all the section about conformity. Saying Adieu to whom we were or to what we were taught to be acceptable is tough but am unsure whether this change occured by choice or was it put upon. Enlightenment by default in some way hmmm is it true enlightenment, still and yet it happens, what truly matters I guess :)<br /><br />Enjoy the potluck!<br />Here is mine: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-79441707405528845502011-05-02T15:50:35.458-07:002011-05-02T15:50:35.458-07:00Cheers everyone!Cheers everyone!Don't Want A Real Jobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01379423402452855166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-41572485688170540472011-05-02T09:53:15.818-07:002011-05-02T09:53:15.818-07:00Wow,Nnathan! You explored so deep spaces with this...Wow,Nnathan! You explored so deep spaces with this one. I like the mix of emotion, spiritual practice, and pragmatism. A compelling read.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-87442127914279523062011-05-02T05:46:45.738-07:002011-05-02T05:46:45.738-07:00you are a fine bhikkuyou are a fine bhikkuBrother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-59830922968703810862011-05-02T05:10:52.959-07:002011-05-02T05:10:52.959-07:00It is only parts of ourselves that we have to disc...It is only parts of ourselves that we have to discard to achieve greater freedom. Roughly quoting Kahlil Gibran. Yes, we will get help in the process but we have to accept it as it comes to us. <br />I agree with everyone who has said that the last stanza is the best. Powerful ending.madhumakhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09624377766663002237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-75878860272651401052011-05-01T19:48:22.520-07:002011-05-01T19:48:22.520-07:00amazing one..
well done.
come in if you wish.amazing one..<br />well done.<br /><br />come in if you wish.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-39755057354078103952011-05-01T18:44:23.684-07:002011-05-01T18:44:23.684-07:00I especially love your last stanza. Outstanding.I especially love your last stanza. Outstanding.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-63843072458108498802011-05-01T16:51:48.510-07:002011-05-01T16:51:48.510-07:00Thank you Mary! It's all a cycle.Thank you Mary! It's all a cycle.Don't Want A Real Jobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01379423402452855166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-80165669341649927742011-05-01T16:38:58.466-07:002011-05-01T16:38:58.466-07:00Nathan, I like this poem very much. It expresses ...Nathan, I like this poem very much. It expresses my sentiments. Time moves on, does not stand stil.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-15631187135559913882011-05-01T16:11:38.650-07:002011-05-01T16:11:38.650-07:00Cheers Marian!Cheers Marian!Don't Want A Real Jobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01379423402452855166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-17713465558238467142011-05-01T16:02:57.270-07:002011-05-01T16:02:57.270-07:00burning sage just in case? i've done that.
i l...burning sage just in case? i've done that.<br />i like your voice, good poem, just like it.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-33910419222984059102011-04-29T21:36:12.546-07:002011-04-29T21:36:12.546-07:00#Respect. good read#Respect. good readAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-48563791912872864512011-04-29T20:03:49.253-07:002011-04-29T20:03:49.253-07:00You got it B! Been a little busy and distracted la...You got it B! Been a little busy and distracted lately...trying to read and post more often now...Cheers!Don't Want A Real Jobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01379423402452855166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-77994025839883160692011-04-29T19:53:28.434-07:002011-04-29T19:53:28.434-07:00hey man thanks for dropping into friday poetically...hey man thanks for dropping into friday poetically...hope you have a great weekend!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-32630222476748716092011-04-29T08:53:07.674-07:002011-04-29T08:53:07.674-07:00so thoughtful! you might enjoy my latest:
http://b...so thoughtful! you might enjoy my latest:<br />http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/04/selah.htmlbttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-10877545748506251422011-04-29T05:39:42.138-07:002011-04-29T05:39:42.138-07:00Very interesting piece, definitely one that makes ...Very interesting piece, definitely one that makes you think. Also, loved the last line of your first stanza.Paul Mullinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08342387711052394010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-70773644804115863472011-04-28T19:21:25.165-07:002011-04-28T19:21:25.165-07:00lovely twists of time and words.
enjoyed the imag...lovely twists of time and words.<br /><br />enjoyed the imagery,<br />Happy Rally.<br /><br />:)Hyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279893697543576860.post-78679569188090336272011-04-28T04:05:48.723-07:002011-04-28T04:05:48.723-07:00hey man, been a while since you last posted. hope ...hey man, been a while since you last posted. hope spring is treating you good and you find that contentment and rebirth. masks, yes i know them well.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com